It was on a cold day, at seven o'clock pm. The night was falling on London.
A young warmly-dressed lady was going back to her place, camly, in her thoughts, taking the same way as usual. She met nobody.
When she took a dark alley, without any light, a strange man appeared suddenly. He was wearing a long black coat and gloves. He was whistling a sad melody, a terrible smile on his face.
The woman didn't pay any attention and kept on walking. But the odd guy accosted her. He wanted to know what time it was. She answered him and started to go away. The man took her arm, violently. She struggled. The guy hit her, again and again. She shouted and he finally knocked her out.
Then, he pulled off her clothes, raped her, took a knife and slid the blade on her body. His smile became bigger. He stabbed her. He pushed the knife in her chest. He removed the heart, mutilated the body of the victim.
The killer laughed, cleaned his weapon and left the woman behind him, with the heart in his and.
Petite rédaction que j'ai du faire en anglais. J'ai eu 15,5 (je crois que c'est un peu surnoté ^^)